response to feedback

i think that our feedback for our rough cut was okay, but because we started over last lesson we didn't actually get a chance to put down all the base tracks that we had shot, so it looked like we only shot at one location. which we explained. another thing that we brought up was if people thought we cut to different shots often, but they said that it suited the beat of the song. they also liked that we changed the pace of the editing when the beat of the song changed. someone said that they liked the jump cut at the beginning of the song. we got some point on what we could do better also, in one of our shots we left the sound on so you can still hear the background noise as we forgot to mute that base track. we also didn't have as many close ups as people wanted in the video but we have now went back and put more of our close ups in. we also needed to cut earlier in one of our shots as karen is singing even though there was no music to sing to as she was starting to say something that we cut off. so we have to now go back and cut earlier.

targets:

• to get up all our base tracks
• to mute the un muted base track 
• to slow down our fast base tracks